Single Stream Recycling

Essay topics:

Single Stream Recycling

The diagram provides information recycled items are sorted in the single-stream recycling system. They all are mixed together and sorted by a machine. Sorting process will separate several things from the recycled items.
First, unload all items that are collected in a truck to a conveyor belt. As all things are on the conveyor, large stuffs are taken. Next stage is screening process to put away cardboard and paper. After that stuffs clear from large thing, cardboard and paper, then take away steel cans from the recycled items by using magnetism. After that processes, next is to remove and crush glass bottles, so that pure plastics will remain the end stuff that what we want. Finally the last process is to sort plastics type to box.
In conclude, there are seven stages to sorted plastic type to box from mixed recycling stuff. All processes aim to take away and remove all stuff except plastics.

Votes
Average: 6.3 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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The diagram provides information recycle...
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...everal things from the recycled items. First, unload all items that are collect...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...remain the end stuff that what we want. Finally the last process is to sort plastics ty...
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...ocess is to sort plastics type to box. In conclude, there are seven stages to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91558441558 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3168718333 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1564186589 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8181818182 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181621554161 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752077694584 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154781777701 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154293359473 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149955200124 0.0819641961636 183% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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