In some nations, there has been an increase in the number of residents who are keen on exploring the foundation of the apartment or house in which they are residing in. Several reasons can explain this trend and many ways can be taken to meet the needs of people.
This phenomenon happens due to loads of reasons, one of which is security issues. Before investing money in a house or building, citizens tend to find out about the history of that, which is a rewarding way for them to avoid being at risk of crime rate. A telling example is that apartments in the urban area are now equipped with surveillance, which is followed by the degradation of robbers and so on. In addition, nobody looks forward to being taken in by agents that are not guaranteed. The second cause of this is enhancing knowledge. Individuals living in their house want to tell their children or foreigners about the origin of their places of living with full of pride.
There are lots of workable methods that people can take to better their understanding of places where they are residing in. The main way is to sign in to the local websites, which allocate people with an enormous amount of valuable information and data. By doing this, individuals will be kept updated with the news and changes that take place in the area. Another measure is asking the senior citizens and people living in the proximity of the area. This is sometimes superior to the solution mentioned above in case the local website has not updated the news yet.
In conclusion, there are a lot of causes that lead to people's exploration of their living destinations and several methods can be taken to please their needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 33.7804878049 178% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 295.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67457627119 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51688009949 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535593220339 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0323465689 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203948944793 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663054543974 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390983688981 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118667577882 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301133426514 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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