Recently, we have witnessed new debated erupted among the proponents on the influence and the effects of the law on human behavior and society as a whole. Many are of the view that law has a profound impact on human behavior, whereas, others have opposite view stating that other aspects like social and cultural norms of the society has paramount effects on human behavior rather than law. According to me, to some extent law changes human behavior and plays a significant role in the cognitive and holistic development of human behavior and society.
To begin with, the fear of severe punishment forces people to follow the rules and regulations imposed by the legislation in the forms of law. It is in the behavior of law-abiding citizen to practice law in order to make their country a better place to live. For instance, by fearing harsh punishment and heavy fine, we all observed traffic rules formed by government agencies, that force us to fasten seat belts, drive at specific speed limits and following various traffic signals. Just imagine chaos caused by people, if they do not follow any government laws and behave as per their wish or thinking.
On the other hand, the law has a partial influence on human behavior as the majority of critical habits are developed in the grown-up years of children. They learn a great deal of discipline and cultural and social fabric in school and by observing the behavior of their parents and surroundings. For example, I learn great importance of social justice and discipline from my grandfather during my childhood days. it's his thought which has planted a seed of behavior during my early days.
In conclusion, from the above examples it is evident that for the holistic and cognitive of the human, society, and nature, law plays a significant role along with the right blend of social environment and settings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ects on human behavior rather than law. According to me, to some extent law changes human behav...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...y grandfather during my childhood days. its his thought which has planted a seed of...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y grandfather during my childhood days. its his thought which has planted a seed of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 965.302439024 161% => OK
No of words: 316.0 196.424390244 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93037974684 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62433944199 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 283.868780488 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5543290743 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306024230889 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108651652289 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812346409984 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160164372096 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795622051313 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 40.7170731707 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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