Many people think that regions influence a successful person. What is your opinion about a native region and accomplished person's influence on the region he below to? Explain it with examples.
Since the last few decades, we have witnessed numerous successful people worldwide. Proponents are debating over this phenomena, many argue that native regions have a profound impact on the success of this entrepreneurs. However, others have opposite views stating that regions are not significant when it comes to a successful business or person. In this article, I will lay my opinion after analyzing both sides.
To begin with, rich demographics play important role in the success of people, First, the education systems and suitable ecosystem play a paramount influence on the success of a person. For instance, a majority of successful information technology people are from the Silicon Valley of the USA, where they got the right academic knowledge and atmosphere to successes in life. We have seen enormously successful people like Bill Gates of Microsoft, Steve Jobs of the Apple computers and Mark of Facebook. Hence, native regions can prove to be a game changer when it comes to success.
On the other hand, there are many successful leaders who rose from unconventional regions and achieved greatness in life. For example, Nelson Mandela from South Africa and Gandhi from India has reached to top of success due to their leadership traits.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that although native regions have an important role to play in the success of a person, however, many great leaders have borne out of different regions. According to me, regions are somewhat important, but personality traits are the most important to become a successful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23046875 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79114888262 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2777686524 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317278625422 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118199133681 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689686530664 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1940516341 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628567285654 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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