Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Centuries ago, there were lot of species of plants and animals on the earth which are got diminished slowly like dinosaurs etc. Nowadays we don't see any animal specie of that kind around us. These kind of animals were very dangerous for human life. In this essay I'll discuss that why the environmental problems of these days are more significant than the loss of those old species of animals and plants.
Firstly, I will say that it was a good deed that happened to the earth that animals like dinosaurs are not animals because they were kind of very large and dangerous animals that could've caused threat to our lives and our other living sources. I think if they were not faded away from the earth by themselves then we the humans have killed them to make our lives danger-less.
For example, if we ever see a lion coming in urban areas then the people will surely run away from him to save their lives and in this rush of people many people can lost their lives and get injured. So, the old species were not that important remain on the earth.
Secondly, I think the environmental problems of these days like air pollution, water pollution and noise pollution are harming the human lives and as well as animals. We need to control these environmental problems to make our and other species living's better and better. For example, many people throw garbage in the water that cause the deaths to water species like fishes that are like food to us, in this way we are not only damaging the other species but our own lives as well.
In conclusion, I will say that thinking about the environmental problems of these days are important than of those species that no more lies on earth. Making our lives better is in our own hands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27992554407 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477564102564 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1170184223 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295135367466 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11900551805 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800511845213 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179908358669 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831065109965 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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