Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is a language of humanity, and it has the power to bring people of diversity regardless of their age under the same umbrella. I feel that there are only a few exceptions when music fails to be global, but in most scenarios, it creates connections among humans.
Firstly, as many people say, music has no language, and therefore, anyone can enjoy music anytime from anywhere in the world. International concerts are the best example of this where often the artists perform their native pieces, and the audience appreciates it tremendously. When performance reaches people's hearts, the boundaries of age or cultural adversities get pushed to an unimaginable extent.
Secondly, music can make people more tolerant, and it can influence global connectivity. Through music, we realize others' emotions on a deeper level, and as a result, it helps us to generate new perspectives. Consequently, we start to comprehend, realize, and appreciate previously unexplored ideas or philosophies better, or at least, it makes us see the beauty of diversity. This is the only way to develop respect for the difference that leads to more tolerance, and this can happen at any age because realization is not limited to aging.
On the other hand, certain music can be biased towards certain beliefs, and therefore, not everyone would welcome it. Though this limitation will always persist as our planet is massively diversified, I believe these are only rare cases -- music is mostly for everyone.
In conclusion, to bring humanity together music can play a vital role as it can overcome the obstacles of age and dissimilarity. I think we all feel the same feeling while experiencing a certain musical that is the superpower of music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 282.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1134751773 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96726806907 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 106.607317073 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.482926829268 2071% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.5958027919 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234257282383 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804131923116 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573974674502 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124728355067 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451594418798 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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