Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this present instance, the phenomenon of learning in a different city increased dramatically. Although a group of thought perceives that living in a different city for the study is the best way for students, others opine that living in their own hometown is a good idea. Both views has its own outcomes, as well as their pros and cons. Prior to my opinion, both the arguments are elaborated further.
Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that students want to become an independent child. To justify, living in another city is helped clean, washing, cooking, and many other household work, which help adults how to become an independent adult. Moreover, youngsters can enhance their communication skills. Since bill paying and banking works have been done by the young generation, they need proper ability to speak. Last but not the least, academic results will increase by living out from hometown, as group studies will allow understanding more concepts of the syllabus.
On the contrary, proponents of the later view describe into consideration on an individualistic basis. The first argument they bring to the surface is that living in their own city allows developing relations. To justify, As the everyday conversation is enhanced the relationship between parents and young people will increase, this can increased love for family.
To conclude, despite living in their own hometowns may increase development of the family, adults can transform their lifestyle by becoming independent and socialize with their peer group, and this helps in their academic institutions. I would agree with the former view than the latter because living out of hometown has its own advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...own hometown is a good idea. Both views has its own outcomes, as well as their pros...
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Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... idea. Both views has its own outcomes, as well as their pros and cons. Prior to my opinio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27106227106 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83285440307 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7952691707 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350395321119 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105947034963 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083602366044 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216510762458 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700303857292 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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