Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.
What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?
It is undeniable that various individuals have problems with how to maintain their diet. There are various reasons behind this issue; however, certain steps should be taken to tackle this occurrence. Both the causes and solutions will be discussed further.
Discussing the reasons, the foremost one is that in the poor area, people do not have money to purchase healthy food. This is because, poor people buy food from their daily basis when they have done their physical work, and this problem has an impact on their children as a malnutrition infant. In addition to this, working with a concentration led to an impact on the diet of healthy food, because there are a lot of professions in which they need more hours in working and as a result spending time on food has a problem.
On the other hand, certain remedies can be taken into consideration on an individualistic basis. The most beneficial solution is that the Government should provide healthy food in remote areas, where generally people are suffering from a poor diet. Another solution is that Working people need to keep an eye on their eating habits. To justify this, this can be done by providing a lunch break to these employees, so they have more time for injecting food.
To conclude, despite the fact that in the rural area people do not have money, and working people are busy in their work, taking steps from the Government can solve this problem with a lack of dieting. Henceforth, I believe this debate must be considered on a serious note.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8320610687 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56834780853 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3208859368 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310781653633 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118462266212 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551388776189 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20397406673 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448526104575 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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