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 The chart reveals the amount of garbage a particular recycling centre collected from 2011 to 2015 ( units are measured in tons).
At the first glance, it is obvious that the figures for all types of trash fluctuated during the timeframe. Moreover, in 2012, the amount of trash of almost all types fell to a low. Furthermore, the weight of paper recycled by this centre exceeded the rest during the period, with the exception of 2013; while the figure for garden was smallest.
Looking at the bar chart in more details, the weight of paper collected in the half decade waved dramatically, from 57 tons at the beginning of the period to 40 tons in 2013 and 70 tons in 2015. In addition, paper was the most collected type of garbage; only in 2013 did the weight of glass overcame the figure for paper to come in the first place. In the same way, the amount of glass also witnessed a fluctuation during the period, from 48 tons in 2011 to 52 tons after 4 years.
Moving on to the rest categories, the weight of tins collected by this recycling facility ranked the third, with the figure varying steadily from 35 tons to 39 tons at the end of the period; furthermore, in 2012, this figure hit the lowest point, at 27 tons. Besides, the waste type least collected was gardening, with the lowest figure at 15 tons in 2012 and the peak at 35 tons at the end of the given period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cling centre collected from 2011 to 2015 units are measured in tons. At the firs...
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...re exceeded the rest during the period, with the exception of 2013; while the figure for garden was s...
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...nt of glass also witnessed a fluctuation during the period, from 48 tons in 2011 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, look, moreover, so, third, while, in addition, in the first place, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44664031621 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38178945238 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7415542803 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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