summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

7 steps included in the process by which the bricks are manufactured are illustrated clearly in the flowchart above.

First of all, the raw material, clay, are collected by digger from the area where there are rich resources of clay. Then the raw material are further processed by a metal grid and a roller. After that, added by sand and water, a mixture is made and then it is either put in a mould or in a wire cutter to become brick-shaped pieces.

The next step is putting the shaped bricks into a drying oven. After 24-48 hours, they will be kept in a moderate temperature of 200℃-980℃. Subsequently, they will be transferred into a high temperature with 870-1300 centigrade. Following is a cooling chamber, where the bricks will be cooled down and become hard.

In the end, 48-72 hours later, the bricks get packaged and delivered to the final destination.

Votes
Average: 5.1 (6 votes)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'so', 'then', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205882352941 0.268076937826 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.182352941176 0.116061578633 157% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0882352941176 0.0759168565197 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0470588235294 0.0366838410393 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176470588235 0.0131127313244 135% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.155750635184 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0941176470588 0.0379272487307 248% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.79346195144 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0117647058824 0.0210936926555 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.129411764706 0.0948980150116 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176470588235 0.00437022459523 404% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176470588235 0.00967000014798 182% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 873.0 1161.00487805 75% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78145695364 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311258278146 0.337110787985 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205298013245 0.247514529752 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152317880795 0.171178102325 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112582781457 0.112407865282 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79346195144 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.546246751206 115% => OK
Word variations: 56.7939720802 49.3433353143 115% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7777777778 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5655115228 42.9750493124 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.689975730869 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 37.3075791023 47.7609492067 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.69047619048 2.94281807926 57% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294293579682 0.418131533498 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152391267126 0.181151798455 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.078367972672 0.0850326197045 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628886830744 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202418796275 0.157042692854 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136479560605 0.228904883108 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811563218666 0.108899403657 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.222540680841 0.367819155151 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0482088228421 0.0812612215331 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20044627214 0.316326947829 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429323713737 0.0921553760075 47% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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