The provided table gives information on the amount of employees categorised by genders and that of factories located in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901. Overall, the increase in the number of factories in both countries can be witnessed, whereas the number of total employees showed a reversed pattern. In addition, the ratio of male to female employees had fluctuated over the given period.
At the beginning, the number of manufacturers stood at 225 and tripled to just below 630 in the next twenty years. Ten years after that, the figures reached the peak at 721 and fell to exact 600 factories in 1901. By contrast, the number of total employees, which starts at the high of approximately 480,000 people, experienced a gradual downward trend over the given years and hit the bottom at 61,000 employees in 1901.
In regard to the male-to-female employee ratio, the pattern had fluctuated over time with the amount of female employees exceeding that of male only in the year of 1861. In other given years, the figure of male employees was considerably higher. However, at the end, the difference in the figures between both groups was insignificant.
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- the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011 78
- The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. 73
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, in addition, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0206185567 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78972196171 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7031094366 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27534567771 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109085596766 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104676049343 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188348668496 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125801356835 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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