You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing Task 1
The table illustrates the changes in the totality of factory workforce in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901
In the overall perspective, while the number of factories increased significantly, the total number employees fell dramatically. Moreover, despite initial dominance in terms of number, by the end of the period, there was a minor difference between male and female workers.
In detail, starting at 1851, the number of factories was the lowest at 225 establishments, yet they employed the largest number of worker at 477.100 people, in which there were 287.100 men and 190.000 women. In the next decade in 1861, although there was a tiny increase of 2 factories, the number of employed female workers was bigger than that of male counterparts at 160.000 people and 131.780 people respectively. Fast forward to 1881, when the number of factories nearly tripled to 721 establishment, the total number of employed workers fell to 126.132 people, yet male figure reclaimed their lead in number over the females.
Finally, in the next 20 years, in 1901, accompanied by the notable decrease in the total of factories to 600 establishments, there was a significant drop in number of employees as well as almost half of previous workforce had been relieved off duty and only 61.000 workers remained at work. Moreover the gap in number between male and female employees was 1000 people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... England and Wales between 1851 and 1901 In the overall perspective, while the nu...
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Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...d only 61.000 workers remained at work. Moreover the gap in number between male and fema...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14912280702 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85946076228 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2104321107 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.714285714 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146905208758 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779483285036 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607029826901 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119934798184 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529441036718 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.