The tabular chart depicts the statistics about global electricity generated by renewable sources over a span of 4 years from 2009 to 2012.
Overall, the production of electricity using renewable material across the world increases continuously for each type throughout the time period.
It is apparent from the table that the most prominent source of renewable energy was hydraulic energy as it inclined from 3329 TWh in 2009 to 3363 TWh in 2012. Bio-mass and wind energy also generated significant amount of electricity. In 2009, around 250 TWh of electricity was produced by each of these types. However, the amount of electricity created by wind energy got doubled in 3 years times whereas a small increment of merely 80 TWh was seen in the generation of bio-mass energy.
Meanwhile, the power supply used to produce from solar energy became five times from 21 TWh to 104 TWh at the end of the time phase. While, geothermal energy had a minimal rise in its production amount which was just 3 TWh.
- Some people think that the fictional violence portrayed on TV is harmless entertainment. Others disagree and think that it encourages bad behaviour. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012 79
- The governement should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Childhood obesity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world Because of this some people think that adverts for fast food sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in school and college To what extent do you agree or disagree with this 93
- Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world However the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored To what extent do you agree or disagree 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69846169173 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.547699996 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198839510753 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949815345024 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828591092597 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142599212798 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825958719666 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.