The fictional violence portrayed on television is a matter of discussion. One school of thought recons that it is merely harmless entertainment. However, other claim that the violence shown on television fuels the violent behavior of viewers. In my perception, fictional violence is responsible for encouraging the negative attitude of audience of TV.
Considering those who strongly believe that the purpose of fictional violence is fun only. According to them, such performances are just the pieces of acting to attract the viewers so that they portray the emotion behind the scene, it is demand of the script. For example, a famous TV series Pearl Harbour has portrayed regarding World War Second. The fictional violence was performed to expose the reality.
On the contrary, umpteenth socialists keep a point of view that TV influences the viewers profoundly, they try to copy the chareacters of daily shop operas. In Canada, a study revealed that the murder rate get doubled after the introduction of television. Similarly, in Brazil, in the influence of a main character of a shop opera, the divorce rate escalated dramatically.
After taking both sides in consideration and much deliberation, I have reached to on opinion that television is responsible for provoking the audience. when both positive and negative characters are glorified on the television, by watching there behavior again and again, unconsciously the viewers adopt the negative behavior in terms of aggressiveness. It is therefore, I believe that TV encourages the people to be violent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second, similarly, so, therefore, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38617886179 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13710804565 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2425008644 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200691488063 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679045809095 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466081430482 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110603359556 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624880650009 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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