The table below gives information about the average annual spending of University students in three different countries.
The provided tubular chart is the representation of money which is spent by the University students per annum in USA UK and Australia.
As can be observed, USA students spend the major amount of money which is $5,000 and it is followed by UK and $500 less spending whereas Australia spend least proportion for various things. Looking at the chart, in USA and UK, university students spend most of their money in accommodation which is nearly half and just over a quarter in proportion respectively.
However, the major expenditure by the University students in Australia is on food. UK and USA spend equal amount of money in food and leisure activities which is nearly a quarter of total proportion as compared to expenditure in Australia students spend half amount of money than other two countries. Whereas, the least expenditure of money in UK and USA is on books while in Australia it is on other things.
Overall, the expenditure by the students in USA and UK is always higher in many different areas than Australia but except for food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...spend the major amount of money which is ,000 and it is followed by UK and 00 less...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spend the least'.
Suggestion: spend the least
... and 00 less spending whereas Australia spend least proportion for various things. Looking ...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...dents in USA and UK is always higher in many different areas than Australia but except for foo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84916201117 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84271370201 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446927374302 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4558185203 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147327801917 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870819679054 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386411010207 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101270021973 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240791146434 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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