The table below gives information about a restaurant s average sales in three different branches in 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The tabulated information provided details about average sales of three different branches of a restaurant in the year 2016. The three branches are situated in Vancouver in the streets of Georgia, Dunsmuir and Drake. The provided details include number of transactions, transaction value, number of eat-in transactions, number of take-away transactions and the most popular item.

The restaurant in Georgian Street has highest transactions with 849 in average, where as restaurant in drake Street has minimum average transactions of 390, the restaurant of Dunsmuir has a medium number of average transactions with 750. Even though Dunsmuir restaurant has a average transaction of 750, it has minimum transaction value less than that of restaurant in Drake with $5.61. Restaurants in Georgian and Drake has average transaction value of $10.69 and $9.02 respectively.

Drake street restaurant has more eat-in transactions, but restaurants in Dunsmuir and Georgian streets has more take-away transactions than that of eat-in. As usual, Georgia Street has highest eat-in and take-away transactions among the three with 405 and 449 respectively and Drake as minimum with 200 and 190 respectively.

All the branches of the restaurant has the cuisine made of chicken as most famous, Georgia has Chicken Burger as most popular where as Dunsmuir and Drake street restaurants are famous for the dishes Chicken wings and Chicken pasta.

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Average: 4.4 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...streets of Georgia, Dunsmuir and Drake. The provided details include number of tran...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nsactions and the most popular item. The restaurant in Georgian Street has highe...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...m. The restaurant in Georgian Street has highest transactions with 849 in average, where...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ghest transactions with 849 in average, where as restaurant in drake Street has minimum ...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...50. Even though Dunsmuir restaurant has a average transaction of 750, it has mini...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...rgia has Chicken Burger as most popular where as Dunsmuir and Drake street restaurants a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52054794521 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02387240819 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388127853881 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0849603579 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158902566689 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976105960477 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11363694113 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105190691554 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062348465154 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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