The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows information about the underground railway systems in six popular cities which built during 1863 and 2001.
By the popular of tokyo and this morden technology that the number of passenger per years of underground railway systems which established in 1927 with approximate two thousands million people.
The first three underground railway systems which built in london, paris and tokyo have length of route about 394
kilometers, 199 kilometers and 155 kilometers, respectively. london's underground railway systems have smallest number of passenger with only approximate 800 million people per year, and the underground railway systems have largest number of passenger is tokyo with more than 1900 million passenger per year.
The next three underground railway systems in washington dc, kyoto and los angeles which established in 1976, 1981 and 2001, respectively. washington dc's underground railway systems have length of route about 126 kilometers and keep the number of passenger modestly with only under 150 million individuals per year. Not only did the length of route of kyoto and los angeles underground railway systems had short, but also the number of passenger were the least of six cities with only approximate 50 million citizens per years. Though this table we can see how modern, convinence and popular of underground railway systems in all around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42396313364 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72172000287 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456221198157 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7251048531 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.125 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215231719842 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128096570386 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798750319407 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159493867511 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946794065408 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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