The table illustrates the differences in the underground railway systems between the six famous cities.
Overall, the information provided focuses on the open day, the length of railways and the number of customers. Individually, London built the longest line (394 kilometers) and the shortest is of Kyoto (11 kilometers), but most of the passengers were in Tokyo (1927 million).
The first railway among six areas is London which is open in 1863, and then gradually in Paris (1900), Tokyo (1927), Washington DC (1976), Kyoto (1981) and Los Angeles (2001). Take a look at the tracks, the kilometres of route in Paris,Tokyo and Washington DC distance each other a small gap (199,155,126). However, it is crystal clear that in Kyoto and Los Angeles are considerably distinct from the other sections, they are tiny compared to the others.
The services of the railway system from six cities are different. The quantity of the route cannot show the exact income. For instance, the consumption in Paris is nine times as much as Washington DC (1191 to 144) although their lines are nearly similar (199 to 126)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Tokyo
...tracks, the kilometres of route in Paris,Tokyo and Washington DC distance each other a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96174863388 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71106548772 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8403294847 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129441630591 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629655404261 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874781183364 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104524596649 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924908216386 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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