The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table presents information about six countries’ subway systems, including the year they started working, the number of kilometres of route and passengers per years in million units.
Overall, while London is the oldest and longest underground railway system, modern systems such as Kyoto and Los Angeles are shorter and could not commute a large number of passengers.
In spite of its age from 1863, London has a 394-kilometre route, which is the longest subway systems and could pass 775 million passengers per year. However, being the newest, which was introduced to travelling in 2001, Los Angeles only serves 50 million commuters per year. In addition, Kyoto, which is the smallest system in capacity, is only 11 kilometres in route length and serves 45 million people.
In terms of Tokyo, although it has only 155 kilometres in the length of the route, the number of commuters per year of Tokyo reaches the highest point, which is 1927 million and many times as many as that of Kyoto. Similar to Tokyo, among European countries, Paris takes the most important role in travelling people whose the figure of 1191 million commuters per year with only 199 kilometres of route.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...es of route and passengers per years in million units. Overall, while London is the...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...geles are shorter and could not commute a large number of passengers. In spite of its age fro...
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Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: WHOSE_DT[5]
Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: who's
...ost important role in travelling people whose the figure of 1191 million commuters pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, in addition, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06565656566 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53958056417 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570707070707 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.9054726289 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.285714286 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0746503250504 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401548287546 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048299915577 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632703080687 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520001024145 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.