The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002

The given data represents the percentages of consumer spending on three items in

Ireland, Italy, spain, sweden and turkey in 2002. Following the table data, those country

spent more on food/ drinks/ tobacco than they did for clothing/ footware or

entertainment/ education

According to the data. The turkey spent the highest proportion on Food/ drinks/ tobacco

with 32.14% and instituded one third of their total expenditure on spending products.

Follow the turkey, the ireland account for 28.91% and it stood the second postion.

Whereas, the Sweden is allocated 15.77%, it is less ½ proportion than turkey and it also

spent lowest on clothing/ footwear. For spending on clothing and footware, it is

fluctuated around 5% to 9% of which Italy spent the highest percentage (9%). It is double

sweden. Ireland, spain, turkey spend proxmimately 6% on clothing and footwear

For spending on entertainment and education. Follow these date, the leisure and

education allocated the lowest percentage of consumer expenditure. The highest amount

spent on this section was done by turkey (4.35%). The least amount was done by Spain

(1.98%). Ireland accounted for 2.21% and make less than ½ consuming proportion in

turkey while Italy and sweden is accounted for around 3%. All of nation spent on this

item are less than 5%

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46226415094 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66101290415 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4999829967 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0769230769 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 3.83414634146 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140938648356 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548410630739 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646740770254 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516033871002 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606268086109 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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