Some people believe that should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state . Do you agree or disagree.
Money is most vital in life because nowadays without money people do not survive.in the current time advancement of technology.the topic should local people keep all they earning or they should paid tax.i completely disagree with this statement and I shall explore the point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Firstly; government provide the free education,which people under the poverty line , and also provide the many opportunities for studernt . For instance which people gain the highest marks in the school government give schoolership or some time give job. When people pay the tax.in the moderlizem era teacher give the knowledge though the computer. Moving further,government use the tax for country development .goverment open the many factories for people they do the job ,as well as make the many thing like new road ,and also Modify the historical place.
Secondly ; government open the many hospitals for people they take the free medicine in the hospital ,and it is for all ages people like,younger,child.older.government open the pansion scheme for old people . They give the money for people fulfil the basic nessary.
On the other hand,few people think that government do not give the proper r opportunity for people , for instance: government open the hospital but not proper treatmentment there . Becouse no machine available there, also in the education school not provide technical education. Government take the tax from who people under the poverty line it is not good . Becouse already they not fulfill the daily needs
To sum up , tax pay is very benifical for country development, but also it is harmful of that people who are unemployed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26037735849 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33665655701 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6736192769 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242417207679 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999152211968 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816327492962 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153016078894 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892004708555 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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