The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and of women working in different occupations

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The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and of women working in different occupations.

The chart gives information about the amount of money that male and female workers earn every week, regarding five separate professions.

Generally, it is clear that professionals are people who get the highest level of income while a contrasting pattern is applied to manual labourers. In addition, there is a noticeable discrepancy between men and women working in the same position, regardless of occupation.

Specifically, male professionals earn 2000 dollars per week, which is 100 dollars higher than their female counterparts. Moreover, the most apparent difference in terms of earnings is recorded in technician positions with men being paid 1400 dollars weekly compared to 900 dollars for women.

Regarding other majors, female workers in the service sector and women who practice administrative/clerical work are supposed to experience the same salary variation of 350 dollars when compares to their male colleagues. Finally, a similar picture is witnessed in manual labourers when employers pay 1100 dollars weekly for men and 850 dollars for women.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, regarding, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61728395062 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1859507167 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4364370574 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182759967964 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848175808862 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557904684023 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101082310062 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039048698772 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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