The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table displays the population count for Argentina, Indonesia, Italy, and the Republic of Korea from 2003 and foresees the trend in the future for 2025 and 2050. The figures were presented in millions.
Overall, it was noticeable that Indonesia was the most populated among the four countries in 2003 and even in the future years ahead it is projected to still be the highest while Argentina has the lowest count of people in 2003 it will be replaced by Italy at the bottom in the upcoming 2050.
In detail, during 2003 Indonesia had the most dense population of 238 million then is foreseen to have an increase of almost 100 million by 2050. In a similar pattern, Argentina was at the bottom at 34 million people in their country and is noted to rise by nearly 14 million respectively by 2025 and 2050.
However, the Republic of Korea and Italy will have a very minimal population growth by the end of 2050 in fact Koreans had started at 48 million in 2003 and will have a slight increase of 4 million only in 2025 and remained static by 2050. On the other hand, Italy is projected to drop its population to around 9 million and then be the lowest among all countries in 2050.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, still, then, while, in fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50697674419 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42242989094 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6031678487 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.428571429 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216926036143 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110876042292 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699820218994 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150857493656 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911215763119 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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