The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
The table gives information about a survey where 6800 Scotish students above the age of 16 were surveyed about their participation on various cultural activities within the past 1 year.
Overall, a lot of people participated on performances including dancing, singing, playing music and acting where adults between the age 16-24 accounted for the highest percentage. However, activities based on computers had the least number of participants.s
As the table shows, about 35% of people between the age 16-24 participated in dancing and singing while the least participants were from the age of 45-74(17%). Surprisingly, people from the same group, 16-24 and 25-44 equally participated in undertaking crafts and cultural purchasing activity which was 11% and 17% respectively.
Regarding visual arts, 30% of adults between 16-24 took an active participation whereas the lowest participation was from people of the age 47-74 which was 11%. Similarly, in writing and computer based tasks, the same age group category took significant proportion of participation(17%) while participation of remaining age groups ranged between 5% to 9% only.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ipation whereas the lowest participation was from people of the age 47-74 which w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, similarly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61849710983 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14670740878 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.0360850685 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 162.0 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189386559768 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106960147623 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675063820571 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13645640455 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657990212687 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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