The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
The given table illustrates Scottish adult's interest in different cultural activities in last year.
Firstly, participation in any performance based cultural activities like dancing,singing, playing, acting etc. are having largest interest by young people(16-24) which is account for 35%, whereas age group of 25-44 and 45-74 are also inclined into this activity with 22% and 17% respectively. Craft activity attracts more aged people like 45-74 age group with 22% and gets less as it comes to young people to 17% for 25-44 and then 11% for 16-24 group. above 24 age people has similar interest in cultural purchases activity like 17%(25-44) and 18%(45-74) . Visual art activity is second highest interested by young people with 30% but less in above 25-year-old group. Writing and computer based activities are done by young group only with 17% and 10% respectively but above 24 interest gets dramatically low to around 8%(25-44) and 5%(45-74).
In a nutshell, different age group has different involvement in activities. Mostly inclined to performance based and less towards computer based.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , singing
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Suggestion: having the largest
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... 45-74 age group with 22% and gets less as it comes to young people to 17% for 25-...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Above
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Suggestion: .
...ases activity like 17%25-44 and 18%45-74 . Visual art activity is second highest i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45882352941 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85037182505 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3882054932 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140825274486 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829283818442 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788748445127 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151424028613 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942227712878 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.