The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
The issue of increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problem than it solves is a controversial one. On the one hand, it is true that rapid pace life causes more issues than resolving it. On the other hand, it is also helps people to live a good life in opulence way. However, in final analysis, I believe that rapid living life might gives you luxury but it causes indirect problems.
The main reason that pace life of mundane causes more health problem and these problems can be a mental and as well as physical. For example, In recent study conducted by Indian health association that daily work-load and fast life gives more physical damage like a computer engineer always has back problem. Some employes work on sites that might heart problems because of laborious efforts. Life is not easy to manage, to overcome this conundrum human should be tantamount between mental and physical helath. Mental health is also important part life, Meditation is the best way to face all troublesome problems.
Another reason that even if this pace life gives more money and luxury but it deprive happiness. For example, people are more involved in work than in family so then it might cause relationship problems. The sole reason behind to earn money is to family happy and to full-fill there requirements but daily busy life always concern about work so it cause less focus on family and relation.
Some might argue, This rapid life gives you pompous amount of money so then you can live like anything you like. This money can help their children future and luxurous life to them. This daily hard life might connected to technology so then it helps to track your health. Technology always has solution of tough life and it helps to solve it.
While there are arguments to be made for both sides, Even if pace rapid life gives you an opulence and money to live but with that luxury and money you can not buy happiness. People are meant for each other they should live for each other. This rapid life only cause you troublesome rather than solving it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26271441928 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2267405559 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6842105263 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386945239685 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143875826562 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154132246514 0.0758088955206 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234700064104 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14643571916 0.0667264976115 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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