The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The given chart illustrates the number of kilowatts of electricity produced and consumed per hour in 2014 by comparing 10 different countries.
Overall, it is clear that China not only produced but also utilized the most electricity, followed by the United States. Meanwhile, other countries only showed a small proportion of usage and production.
As can be preserved, China, standing at more than 5,300 billion kWh rendered and utilized, accounted for the highest number among the ten countries. Following that, the United States generated nearly 4,100 billion kWh and used about 3,900 billion kWh, which generally took second place in both manufacturing and using electricity.
Regarding other features, while figures for France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea, Rep fluctuated from 485 billion kWh to around 560 billion kWh in both categories, other countries exhibited relatively higher numbers. Specifically, Russia and Japan followed the US's electricity production with approximately 100 billion kWh generated. Furthermore, less electricity produced and used was seen in India and Canada, with figures ranging between 500 billion and 870 billion kWh of electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69142857143 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92323555713 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697142857143 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.062243431 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127022394197 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599008949856 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442786470833 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786297084236 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316252904125 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.