The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table gives an idea about the business done by a small resturant located in a commercial area of the centre of city between seven and thirteen October. In general the trend in the data suggests that the resturant does better business during weekdays as compared to weekends. Besides that, the sale during dinner time is much better than that during lunch.
At first, when we compare between the amount generated from lunch on different days, it is found to be highest on Wednesday and lowest on Sunday. Whereas the sale was within a range of $ 2375 - 2500 between Monday, Tuesday, Thursday and Friday. The Saturday was found to be second lowest income day for the resturant.
Secondly, when we look at the sales figures during dinner on the same days, Friday not only peaked among dinner sales of the rest of the days, but indeed shows the best sales figures among the lunch and dinner sales throughout the week.. Like the trend of less business during lunch on weekends, the dinners too generated less revenue during Saturday and Sunday. Rest other days were in range of $3445-3800. Overall when compared between lunch and dinner on any given day, the sales during dinner was much better than that during lunch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...area of the centre of city between seven and thirteen October. In general the tre...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the highest'.
Suggestion: be the highest
...lunch on different days, it is found to be highest on Wednesday and lowest on Sunday. Wher...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2375'.
Suggestion: $2375
... Whereas the sale was within a range of $ 2375 - 2500 between Monday, Tuesday, Thursda...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nch and dinner sales throughout the week.. Like the trend of less business during ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, whereas, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80568720379 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15443344294 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5984495891 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0938936624247 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367084981602 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316731621984 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647857961648 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225157554029 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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