The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business
district.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Sales: Week of October 7-13
Mon Tues Wed Thurs Fri Sat Sun
Lunch $2,400 $2,450 $2,595 $2,375 $2,500 $1,950 $1,550
Dinner $3,623 $3,850 $3,445 $3,800 $4,350 $2,900 $2,450
WRITING TASK
The table illustrates the total amount of sales during a week (7 to 13 October) of a small restaurant located in the downtown business district. Overall, it is clearly shown that people tend to pay more for dinner in comparison to lunch.
When it comes to lunch, in the first three days of weekday which is on monday, tuesday and wednesday the sales have increased steadily. it grows from $ 2400, $2450, and $ 2595 respectively. Surprisingly, little fall back has been noticed on thursday which accounts for $2375. In contrast, a small rose was found on friday to $2500. However, a huge drop down of $ 1950 and $1550 has been recorded on Saturday and sunday respectively.
Afterward, every day the sales of dinner were higher in compares to sales of lunch. On monday and tuesday, constant growth was found which was $3623 and $3850 respectively. After a minute drop on wednesday, the transactions of dinner increased on thursday and friday. The highest amount of sales found on friday was $4350. Nevertheless, the number of sales was decreased by almost 30% which stopped at $2900. The lowest amount of sales was recorded on sunday at $2450.
In the end, the total amount of sales during lunch was recorded at $15820. Whereas, the total amount of sales in dinner time was recorded at $24418.
- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words Sales Week of October 7 13 Mon Tues W 73
- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words Sales Week of October 7 13 Mon Tues W 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...sday the sales have increased steadily. it grows from $ 2400, 450, and $ 2595 resp...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2400'.
Suggestion: $2400
... have increased steadily. it grows from $ 2400, 450, and $ 2595 respectively. Surprisi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2595'.
Suggestion: $2595
...teadily. it grows from $ 2400, 450, and $ 2595 respectively. Surprisingly, little fall...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1950'.
Suggestion: $1950
...ay to 500. However, a huge drop down of $ 1950 and 550 has been recorded on Saturday a...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ales during lunch was recorded at 5820. Whereas, the total amount of sales in dinner ti...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, nevertheless, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61275920865 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3784423767 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194358870687 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739695329516 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849418225568 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139321853353 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768564622225 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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