The table details the international tourist arrivals in millions in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the total numbers of visits and the rate of growth in tourism in eight different countries in 2009 and 2010.
To give an overall view, France remained the most visited nation. While, Germany experienced a noticeable increase in number of tourists, only that of Hong Kong fell.
In detail, even though, French tourism underwent no growth between two years, it still managed to attract the greatest number of visitors at 76 million people. Additionally, despite small growth of 1.5%, tourism in the USA still retained its second rank as 67 million people visited this country in 2010. Similarly, Spain, the UK and Italy experienced little change in visitor growth ranging from 1.8% to 2.3%, which equated to 56 million visits to 45 millions visits.
However, both Turkey and China exhibited double-digit growth at 33% and 55% respectively, especially, in the case of Turkey, the number of visitors at 46 million in 2010 overtook that to Italy.
Finally, tourism in Hong Kong fell by 11% as in 2010 there was 1 million tourists less that of 2009.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, similarly, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02234636872 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58832308122 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8836405189 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159560482083 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706849031069 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465639298815 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091730772222 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487687579554 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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