In recent years, some countries have experienced rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the country side. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?
Nowadays, it is undeniable that rapid economic growth in some nations lead to the promotion of living standards in the cities while ignoring the countryside can create several issues for an entire country. This essay will address the associated problems and provide solutions to solve them.
Moving to the problem side, higher living standards in urban areas may lead to the divide between metropolitan and countryside, yet there can be overcrowding and strain on urban infrastructure. Firstly, the widening urban- rural gap is a drawback as the disparity in living standards between urban and rural areas can lead to a significant divide between the two regions. As a consequence, it will create imbalances of social, economic and political, causing tension and conflicts between different regions within the country. For example, people living in provinces from the north of Vietnam like Thai Binh have lost a large number of workers due to the attraction of the standard of living in Hanoi, which has unbalanced the economy and society here, causing underdevelopment. Second, overcrowding and strain on urban infrastructure can be another issue as concentrated urban development without corresponding infrastructure improvements can lead to overcrowding, strain on resources and increased pressure on urban constructions such as housing, transportation and public services. This can result in decreased quality of life for urban dwellers.
On the other hand, there are some solutions to solve these problems such as letting the countryside have access to basic services or to invest in transportation for urban areas. Firstly, accessing simple services could be a good choice to make the gap between urban and rural areas closer. To exemplify, by ensuring that rural areas have access to quality education, healthcare, clean water, sanitation and other basic services, living conditions in the countryside will be improved and residents can be provided equal job opportunities to bridge the gap between two regions. For example, Hokkaido, a region in Japan, has applied this strategy and as a result, it has improved the quality of life of local people and made the distance between this area and other cities closer. Second, transport investment could be an effective way to deal with the overload and strain on urban areas as it will make the traffic less crowded and make the environment cleaner. To elaborate on it, we should improve public transportation systems such as electric cars or rapid transit buses to provide efficient and accessible alternatives to private vehicles to reduce carbon footprint in the atmosphere and save more travel space. Vietnam has applied to use public buses instead of using private motorbikes and cars and this has reduced the amount of pollution significantly.
To conclude, I repeat that the rapid growth of the economy in the cities is associated with the gap between urban and rural areas and the overload of cities infrastructure so the state must regulate policies and solutions to solve these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2573.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 483.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32712215321 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98118673256 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469979296066 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 814.5 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3870045641 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.8125 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1875 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217799314548 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809999481159 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500430057835 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134970291755 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435825335807 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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