The table shows the figure for imprisonment in thousands in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
The table shows the figure for imprisonment in thousands in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
The bar chart compares the number of people in prison in five different countries over a period of 50 years from 1930 to 1980.
A perusal of the graph indicates that Canada and the United States are the only two countries for greater figures of imprisonment in each year. On the other hand, Great Britain had the lowest number of prisoners for the majority of the period. In Canada, up to 120 thousand people were imprisoned in starting the year 1930. However, in the US and New Zealand, the numbers were stagnant to 100 thousand in the same year. While in Australia and Great Britain had less figure of nearly 70 thousand and 30 thousand in 1930. Furthermore, the figures soared to around 130 thousand in the US in the year 1940. While the numbers were fluctuated down in Canada, New Zealand and Australia. There is no change in Great Britain in 1940. In the US, numbers were slightly dropped to almost 100 thousand in 1950 and there is a steady increment in the Great Britain of 40 thousand while other countries remained unchanged in the same year.
On the contrary, the rate of prisoners was gradually increased in 1960 in four countries except for Canada with Great Britain of 50 thousand. New Zealand and the US were touched to 65 thousand figures while the US with 120 thousand while it is expected to decline in the remaining two countries. In the final year 1980, there was an abrupt change of 130 thousand prisoners in the US and there was gradually increase to 90 thousand in Great Britain and New Zealand.
- The maps shows how Sidney international airport was in 1930 and how it is today 68
- With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this is a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give your opinion. 61
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers; those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work perfromance. 78
- The table shows the figure for imprisonment in thousands in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 67
- The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usand in Great Britain and New Zealand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, except for, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 287.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65156794425 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47591807842 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4429555431 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378818197026 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169067793935 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.23844669806 0.0843802449381 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38912238262 0.15604864568 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.353161210878 0.0819641961636 431% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.