The table shows the number of miles of passengers travelled on five types of transport in a European country in 1995 and 2005. It also shows a projection of the year 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the distance that commuters in a European country travel on six different means of transportation in 1995 and 2005 along with the prediction of 2015.
Overall, it can be seen clearly that the bus was the most popular type of transportation in 1995 and 2005; and the least favourite was the bicycle. Meanwhile, rail is expected to rank the first out of six transit services in 2015.
In 2005, the popularity of bus slight decreased by 6 thousand miles per passengers, compared to 56 thousand miles in 1995. Rail recorded a smaller figure than the bus in both two years; and in 2005, there was a moderate increase in the average distance people travelling by rail compared to the year 1995, from 38 thousand miles to 48 thousand miles. Air, bicycle and motorbike had much fewer numbers compared to the others mentioned above, which were all below 10 thousand miles, with the furthest distance belonging to the motorbike in 1995 and air in 2005, 5 thousand miles and 8 thousand miles respectively.
In contrast, in 2015, rail is expected to be the most favorite means of transportation, with 60 thousand miles per person. bus is predicted to slightly decline by 2 thousand miles compared to the year 2005. The use of air transportation is forecasted to significantly go up to 20 thousand miles per passengers; meanwhile, bicycle and motorbike will still be almost the same as in 1995 and 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'European country travel'.
Suggestion: European country travel
...compares the distance that commuters in a European country travel on six different means of transportatio...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...nd the least favourite was the bicycle. meanwhile, rail is expected to rank the first out...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rail
... compared to 56 thousand miles in 1995. rail recorded a smaller figure than the bus ...
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Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Air
...38 thousand miles to 48 thousand miles. air, bicycle and motorbike had much fewer n...
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Line 13, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bus
...ion, with 60 thousand miles per person. bus is predicted to slightly decline by 2 t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86419753086 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86334597814 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2052833613 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190152212098 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974339928071 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051861314439 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141678524803 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510852946257 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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