The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tables compare the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas from five different European nations between 1999 and 2004Overall, the sales of the two products saw an upward trend except for the figures for Sweden and Denmark declined in terms of bananas. In addition, coffee and bananas were popular in the UK over the period.It can be seen that the sales of coffee in Switzerland reached the highest point in 1999 with 3 million euros, then increased to 6 million euros in 2004. Denmark earned 1.8 million euros in the year 1999, followed by the UK with 1.5 million euros and Belgium with 1 euro. After that, three figures rose up to 2 million, 20 million and 1.7 million euros in 2004, respectively. The lowest point started at 0.8 million euros in the sales of coffee in Sweden then grew up by 0.2 million in 5 years later.Furthermore, in terms of bananas, the UK witnessed the highest recording of sales with 15 million euros in 1999 and 47 million euros in 2004. There was a growth in sales in Switzerland and Belgium, from 1 and 0.6 million euros to 5.5 and 4 million euros, respectively. By contrast, the two remaining countries experienced a downward trend in sales, a decrease of 0.8 million euros in Sweden and 1.1 million euros in Denmark.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, then, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6981981982 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78734210903 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490990990991 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8390120689 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7142857143 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116727337207 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683867284907 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614690467541 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116727337207 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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