The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables compare the same weekend in London and Sydney in terms of temperatures and daylight duration in Decemeber 2018.
In general, the climate in Sydney was much hotter, and daylight in also lasted significantly longer than those of London.
As shown in the table of London, the the minimum and maximum temperature was 3 and 13 degree celsius on Saturday, whereas its of Friday and Sunday was 4 to 9 degree celsius and 5 to 10 degree celsius, respectively. Furthermore, the sun rose and almost at the same time on all three days, around 08:06. Meanwhile, setting hours revolved around 15:58, with the earliest was Friday, at 15:57, and the latest was Sunday, at 15:59.
On the other hand, the table of Sydney shows that the maximum temperature was 31 celsius degree on Sunday, and the minimun one was on Friday, at 17 degree celsius. Besides, temperature of Saturday was 18 to 28 degree celsius. Moreover, the sunrise stayed almost unchanged, at 5:45 on Friday and Saturday and 5:46 on Sunday. Additionally, the sun set at 20:06 on Friday and 20:07 on Saturday and Sunday
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- The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
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... Friday and 20:07 on Saturday and Sunday
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65236365376 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8233845495 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115524270262 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653556292516 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088520334976 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121683973127 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106501396089 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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