Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?
Some people are of the view that intelligence is the most essential attribute for success, but others adopt the stance that intelligence can be evaluated in different ways. This essay disagrees that being intelligent is one of the most crucial factors to achieve progress. In the following lines, we will illustrate the reasons why brilliance only is not sufficient to succeed.
To begin with, some individuals are achieving outstanding flourishing without being smart. In other words, when they belong to affluent families, wealth and connections are the main supports for accomplishment, rather than intelligence. For example, parents who obligate their children to follow their career even though they do not have neither abilities nor skills to fit their position. Hence, if the children have the passion or the ability to acquire and apply knowledge, they will innovate and master their jobs; otherwise, they will fail.
In addition to that, when it comes to measuring smartness level, various tests are available with accurate results because many organizations set minimum requirements before proceeding with any action. For instance, individuals’ abilities to acquire and apply knowledge and skills can be assessed through standardized tests that evaluate different attributes, such as plaining, using language, and understating abstract ideas. Moreover, intelligence can be measured by analyzing an individual's problem-solving skills and the ability to adapt to change. A prominent example is the educational section, which holds this exam for all students’ phases; IQ tests can be held in schools, universities, and student activities as well.
In conclusion, this essay has shown why not only success is the main indicator of smartness, but intelligence can also be measured in other ways that are more accurate and objective. As a result, I am convinced that there are standardizations for human intelligence measurements.
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... their jobs; otherwise, they will fail. In addition to that, when it comes to me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58305084746 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15078135615 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5256390466 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288859052574 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103043463521 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101593263716 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19223950539 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935209600813 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.