Task 1: The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
The table provides information about the workforce of silk production in two countries from 1851 to 1901.
Overall, the total of employers who produced silk was declined over the period, and the number of women is higher than the figure for men. In addition, the factories in two countries increased significantly at the end of period.
Looking at the table chart in more detail, it can be seen that the silk workforce was the largest figure with 130,750 people, including 76,789 women and 53,964 men. In contrast, there was the lowest of silk factories, with only 272 factories in 1851. However, the number of silk production reached 761, nearly triple that of the first year while the total of employees fell over 20,000 people.
Over the following 41 years, the total of number of female and male workers decreased steadily throughout the period, to 25,766 and 32,138 respectively, which contributed to continue drop in the total of employers in 1901 at 38,942 people. Meanwhile, the factories decreased slightly to 623 factories at the end of the period.
- Task 2 People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists teacher are the most successful Discuss both and give your opinion 56
- Task 1 The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901
- Task 1 The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901 73
- Task 2 People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62516785599 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3761075825 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228263957457 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103368665403 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474874763009 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142197853271 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404555331977 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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