The line graph below illustrates the proportions of female employees in USA, Korea, Afghanistan and France through the period of 20 years started from 1985.
Overall, the trends of the amounts of employed women in these four surveyed countries was changing noticeably from 1985 to 2005 specially those in Afghanistan and France. Expect Afghanistan, the percentages of woman who have job in three other mentioned countries all increased at the last years of the period compared with the first surveyed years.
Looking at the details, in the USA, the amounts of women who were employed were rising gradually from just more than 40% to around 65% through the period of 15 years started from 1985. After this significant increase, this proportions seen a unnoticeable drop in the last 5 years of the mentioned period. Korea was the country which had the changing of amounts of female employees almostly similar with America. However, the percentages of women who have job in Korea started with just nearly above 20% and then grow widely to exactly 40% after 20 years.
More specifically, after the inconsiderable fall in the amounts of women who were employed in France in the first 5 years of the surveyed period, the proportions of female labor in this country rose significantly from just more than 30% in 1990 to around 55% in 2005. Unlike others, Afghanistan was the country whose percentages of female employees plummeted suddenly in the last five mentioned years (from 40% to nearly 0%). However before this considerable decrease, the amounts of woman who have job in this nation had increased marginally from more than 30% to 40%.
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns? 73
- The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The bar chart below gives information about four countries spending habits of shopping on consumer goods in 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Task 1 writing - Women employed in four countries 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrates the proportions of fe...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly from just more than 40% to around 65% through the period of 15 years started f...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ificant increase, this proportions seen a unnoticeable drop in the last 5 years o...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...ever, the percentages of women who have job in Korea started with just nearly above...
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Line 7, column 425, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... mentioned years from 40% to nearly 0%. However before this considerable decrease, the ...
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Line 7, column 498, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...decrease, the amounts of woman who have job in this nation had increased marginally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 33.7804878049 178% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69530180436 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0771909709 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.2 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139644382196 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660405416184 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707693120269 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954209287122 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675992759936 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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