The three pie charts below show the change in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.
The given circular charts reveal the information about the annual spending of UK school in the year of 1981, 1991 and 2001, on different five aspects; Insurance, Teachers salaries. Furniture and equpiment , resources and other worker salary. Data is calibrated in per centum.
It can be seen that in the year of 1981 the insurance was antiny fraction .As well as, spending on resources and furniture were equal.Secondly 40% money paid to teachers as a salary. More then a quater given to other workers as a salaries.
In addition with this in the year of 1991, low spending either to insurance or on the furniture equipments. Moreover, paid on different aspects became - 8%, 15% , 9% , 23% and 45% in the year of 2001 respectively.
Overall, it is evident that during the three year higest amount spent on teachers salary.Even , then balanced money spend on other school needs.
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- The three pie charts below show the change in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...achers salaries. Furniture and equpiment , resources and other worker salary. Data...
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...f 1981 the insurance was antiny fraction .As well as, spending on resources and fu...
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...1981 the insurance was antiny fraction .As well as, spending on resources and furn...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...g on resources and furniture were equal.Secondly 40% money paid to teachers as a salary...
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...es and furniture were equal.Secondly 40% money paid to teachers as a salary. More...
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Suggestion: than
...oney paid to teachers as a salary. More then a quater given to other workers as a sa...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a salary' or simply 'salaries'?
Suggestion: a salary; salaries
...then a quater given to other workers as a salaries. In addition with this in the year o...
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Suggestion: addition,
...n to other workers as a salaries. In addition with this in the year of 1991, low spen...
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...r on the furniture equipments. Moreover, paid on different aspects became - 8%, 1...
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...id on different aspects became - 8%, 15% , 9% , 23% and 45% in the year of 2001 re...
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... different aspects became - 8%, 15% , 9% , 23% and 45% in the year of 2001 respect...
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...vident that during the three year higest amount spent on teachers salary.Even , t...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
... the three year higest amount spent on teachers salary.Even , then balanced money spend...
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Suggestion: Even
...higest amount spent on teachers salary.Even , then balanced money spend on other sc...
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Suggestion: ,
...st amount spent on teachers salary.Even , then balanced money spend on other scho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77677565411 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625850340136 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5664015499 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203230759667 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766217630949 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992648191839 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124192348333 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755517626824 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.