The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three circle graphs illustrate annual expenditure variations in a British educational institution in three sample years of 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, teachers’ salaries were the major budgetary item, while insurance accounted for the lowest outlay; meanwhile, spending on other wages, resources and equipment fluctuated significantly.

Starting with staff payments, teachers’ salaries stood at 40% of budget in 1981, rose to 50% in 1991, then declined slightly to 45% in 2001. Payments to support workers, on the other hand, started the period at 28%, fell to 22% in 1991, and further declined to 15% in the final year of the study.

Turning now to other budgetary items, educational resources fluctuated from 15% in the first year to 20% in the second, then dropped to a low of 9% at the close of the study. Furniture and equipment costs, on the other hand, dropped at first from 15% in 1981 to 5% in 1991, then ballooned to 23% by the end of the period. Insurance, always the smallest item of expenditure, was as low as 2% and 3% in 1981 and 1991 respectively, but jumped to 8% in 2001

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87830687831 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89673721206 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.7492316061 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166139577581 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086214195547 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748985243376 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118386936494 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427824740169 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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