tobacco consumption by gender in Great Britain from 1948 to 2005
The chart illustrates the percentage of males and females who consumed tobacco in Great Britain between 1948 and 2005.
Overall, cigarette usage by both genders declined dramatically over the given period.
Looking at the graph in more detail, after fluctuating somewhat, the percentage of male smokers in Great Britain fell gradually from about 63% in 1948 to about 51% in 1968. This proportion then dropped remarkably to about 33% in 1982. From 1982 until the end of the given period, there was an insignificant drop in the percentage of male smokers to about 21%.
As shown in the second data set, the percentage of female smokers started at 40% in 1948. This proportion fluctuated over the first ten-year period and then returned to 40% in 1958. Although there were some slight shifts over the next ten years, this proportion was approximately unchanged in 1968. From 1968 until the end of the given period, the consumption of cigarettes by females in Great Britain roughly halved to under 20% in 2005 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02366863905 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63201608098 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4881910061 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280299139329 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107274592661 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121162193916 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171061417519 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100100770474 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.