ecosystem is destroyed globally. why and solutions?
An increasing concern for many people around the world is a warning rate of natural ecosystem degradation all over the world. The causes of this are numerous and difficult to overcome. This essay will outline the reasons why our natural environment is getting worse day by day, and offer some solutions.
There are two main reasons why ecosystems are being destroyed. The primary issue is human activity. To be specific, humans cut down trees to build houses, factories and other infrastructure to purchase a higher standard of living. These activities result in a lot of species being on the brink of extinction since they lose their habitats and natural food sources. Furthermore, global warming also affects many processes in biological ecosystems. For example, melting ice sheets lead to rising sea levels. This results in disruption of habitats which also drives many species of flora and fauna to extinction or changing their habitats and geographical areas.
Despite these challenges, there are a number of ways to address natural ecosystem degradation. The main solution to combat this issue is by restoring natural ecosystems. The government should protect the natural habitat, animals and plants by imposing strict legislation about deforestation and poaching. Beside that, removing human management and reintroducing rare breeds are also really important to restore the natural ecosystems. A second potential solution is to fight climate change. We need to cut down on emissons by reducing reliance on fossil fuels and using renewable energy.
In conclusion, it must be said that the degradation of natural ecosystems is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. I believe that the best solution to tackle this issue is by fighting climate change. If this measure is adopted, it will go a long way towards resolving the problems caused by global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, second, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32343234323 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82767608655 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1326729575 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8947368421 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155914560219 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462391783521 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533738354467 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909987232025 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178699171242 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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