more and more people move to cities. explain some problems and give solutions
In recent times, urbanization has become a trend for both developed and developing countries all around the world. This tendency causes several problems that authorities have to deal with. This essay will discuss the problems associated with this phenomenon, and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
It is easy to see that the effects on large metropolises because of the great number of people who migrate to megacities are pretty serious. First of all, there is an increased crime rate in different kinds of areas. To be specific, we can all hear about crimes on daily news frequently and it results in people's negative behaviour which is insensitive and less open. Furthermore, in recent years poor air quality is caused by the significant rise in the amount of toxic emissions released from industrial sites and traffic. Serious air pollution puts inhabitants of cities at a higher risk of lung cancer and respiratory illnesses.
However, there are a variety of possible solutions available to address these issues. Firstly, the government should develop provincial towns and rural areas by moving industry and jobs to those regions and improving the education system there in order to reduce the proportion of the population who move to major cities, which helps to manage the community easily. The second solution would be to impose stricter regulations to limit hazardous gas emissions and encourage the use of more environmentally friendly energy sources and promote the use of public transport by making it more attractive and comfortable for people. The problem of both air pollution and traffic congestion would be effectively solved if more people decided to travel by bus or train instead of in their private vehicles.
In conclusion, rural to urban migration is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. I believe that the best solution is to surmount the push factors in rural areas such as poor quality education and lack of job opportunities. If the quality of life in the countryside is improved, people will have a better life without moving to big cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14409221902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79576930775 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625360230548 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7817349072 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210740131791 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051656349977 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047157458691 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101174899298 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709613142838 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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