fast food is becoming more and more popular. why and effects?
In recent times, fast food restaurants are becoming popular in a lot of countries all over the world. This tendency causes several influences on human health that people have to deal with. This essay will discuss the reasons and problems associated with this phenomenon, and offer a possible measure to address this issue.
It is easy to see that the effects on a great number of people who consume fast food are quite serious. First of all, people can run a higher risk of contracting cardiovascular disease. To be specific, fast food contains calories such as sodium and unhealthy fat, which leads to increased obesity, diabetes and hyperlipidaemia risk and the high salt content raising blood pressure. Furthermore, the lack of food safety and hygiene and the low nutritional content are also very common issues in fast food. If people choose to eat junk food, they obviously do not know what exact ingredients were used to make the food and how safe they are. Fast food also tends to be low in nutrients and almost totally lacking in fruit, vegetables, and fiber.
Although there are a lot of negative effects, fast food is still more and more popular nowadays. In my opinion, there are two main reasons for this issue. Firstly, most junk foods are cheap and tasty. Fast food menus are always varied, and the food is eye-catching and easy to satisfy most palates. And best of all, choosing fast food instead of self cooking is really convenient. Most working people choose fast food because they want to eat quickly and cheaply.
In conclusion, the popularity of fast-food restaurants is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. I believe that the best solution to tackle this is increasing public awareness about the harmful effects of industrially produced trans-fatty acids. If this measure is adopted, it will go a long way towards solving the problems caused by high fast-food consumption.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...most palates. And best of all, choosing fast food instead of self cooking is really ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
... convenient. Most working people choose fast food because they want to eat quickly a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, still, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96319018405 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64155849967 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2737707004 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341971146076 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106255508221 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103161395467 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189483302977 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839492743566 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...most palates. And best of all, choosing fast food instead of self cooking is really ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
... convenient. Most working people choose fast food because they want to eat quickly a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, still, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96319018405 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64155849967 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2737707004 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341971146076 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106255508221 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103161395467 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189483302977 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839492743566 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.