Topic: The chart below shows the percentages of five kinds of magazines sold by a company in the UK between 2001 and 2009.
The chart illustrates the sales performances in five distinctive categories by a company in the UK from 2001 and 2009, including economics, sports, social, music, and movie.
As can be seen from the chart, it is apparent that both economics and movie magazines gained popularity among citizens in the UK, increasing throughout the years, whereas there was a sharp decline in the percentage of sports and social magazines. It is also noticeable that at the end of the period, the proportion of music magazines was balanced.
Looking at the chart, social magazines were the most prominent among the five categories, taking the lead with 40% in 2009. This ratio was also twice as greater as the percentage of sports magazines as well as nearly four times compared to music magazines. Nevertheless, in the next four years, it was undergone a rocket decrease by roughly half, and continued the negative trend, hitting the bottom at 5% in 2009. Meanwhile, in 2001, the proportion of sports magazines witnessed a considerable rise to reach at a quarter before falling again at the start point, whilst it is true for music magazines. After dropping by half in 2001, the percentage of these magazines showed a positive trend to go up again at one-in-ten in 2009.
Regarding the ratio of economics newspapers, after maintaining the same ratio for 5 years at 25% until 2005, this percentage rose dramatically to reach the peak of 35% at the end of the examined period. Surprisingly, despite accounting for a tiny ratio, of roughly 5% in 2001, movie magazines grabbed the public’s attention strongly, making a huge contribution to fostering its growth drastically to reach 30% in 2009.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 279.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0394265233 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9065470626 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544802867384 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3938058742 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243856921982 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103216640766 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068161230354 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156320416615 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619580337787 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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