The graph shows the value in US dollars in millions of dollars of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014

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The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.

The line graph illustrates the amount of money (millions of USD) was allocated in four different sectors including company shares, fine art, gold, and property during the period between 1988 and 2014.

Overall, all four categories experienced an upward trend in funds received from investment during the whole period. Investment funds in gold, noticeably, increased more significantly compared to others.

In 1988, the investment fund for fine art was roughly 80 million dollars, while that for gold was a hundred. In the next 18 years, there was a fluctuation in money received by the fine art category before this group experienced a dramatic increase to approximately 350 million at the end of the period. The same pattern can be observed in gold investment. However, the main difference is that in 2012, gold became the most invested asset as this sector reached 400 dollars before dropping to 325 million USD in 2014.

Regarding company shares and property, both categories shared almost the same trend from 1988 to 1994, increasing from 50 to around 70 million. Nevertheless, since then, while the allocation of financial funds applied for enterprise shares increased to 250 million in 2014, that for property fluctuated slightly before reaching 190 million dollars at the end of the period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, regarding, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24401913876 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74055357803 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5160526818 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.777777778 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311443553861 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12266695131 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584630942801 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189258359576 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285243985595 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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