Topic: The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram gives information about how to manufacture cement, while the other illustrates the method of producing concrete from cement elements.
In general, there are five steps in order to create finished cement, using limestone and clay as the two main components, while concrete was produced through the process of mixing four ingredients.
Looking at the production cement process, to start with, limestone and clay are put into a crusher machine to form powder (tạo thành bột). Then, this powder is blended before being passed to the rotating heater machine. In this stage, the mixture is revolved at a high temperature so as to become liquid condense form. In the following stage, the mixture is ground by a grinder machine to produce cement. The process finishes with packaging finishes cement into bags.
Turning to the manufacturing of concrete, this process involves four components, including 15% cement, one in ten water, nearly a quarter of sand, and a half of gravel are poured into a concrete mixer. This equipment rotates at a high speed to blend the materials inside together. The finished concrete made from this process is then utilized for construction purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...xture is revolved at a high temperature so as to become liquid condense form. In the fol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, then, while, as to, in general, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24352331606 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66561050075 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2875760419 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294251559644 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110114574687 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745400893358 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182427839598 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428353356646 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.