Traditional Yemeni Weddimg
Do you know how Yemeni people celebrate their weddings? All people around the world celebrate wedding parties in which they give the groom and the bride their best days during this party. In addition, they dress them delighting and beautiful clothes either traditional or modern. Each one of these people has his own customs and traditions. For example, in Yemeni society, they have three main steps to celebrate weddings: the engagement, the wedding vows, and the wedding party.
Initially, the female relatives of the young man go and visit the girl's house, and they look to her. Then they get back to the man and describe her. Moreover, the man has the right to take a legitimate look at a girl. Eventually, if he agrees to marry her, they propose the girl for the young man. If the opposite happens, then everything goes back to its normal way
The second step is the wedding vows in which the young man and the girl become legally a married couple. After the man pays the girl's dowry, they call a sheikh to make the wedding vows; by giving some Islamic advices, motivating young men to marry, and telling the young man and the girl's father or representative what to say.
The last and the longest step is the wedding party. We do a lot of things and have a lot of fun. For example, few days before the wedding ceremony we invite people whom we know and have a friendly meeting, and when the big day comes, we kindly welcome the guests Besides, we bring and prepare a big feast for them. In the afternoon, we go dancing in our traditional way like Zerbady dance and Pitaiq dance. Moreover, we make a musical night party I'm which we bring a singer, or make a comedian play. Sometimes we make a party before the wedding day we call it "Sharih".
To conclude, styles of wedding ceremonies differ from country to another and Yemeni weddings are full of religious antique traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 337.0 196.424390244 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6528189911 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49777965838 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 106.607317073 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2963120863 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0667478743851 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254447540718 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041587626163 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427032488946 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449305975252 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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