The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.
The pie charts compare the variation in power supplies in America over 10 years, commencing in 1980
From a general perspective, while Oil accounts for the most proportion, hydroelectric power continues to make up the least amount of USA energy sources throughout the period. Another noticeable point is that Americans tend to use traditional instead of modern types of energy in both the timeline.
Regarding conventional fuels, while the percentage of natural gas and oil in 1980 were both lower than the corresponding figures in the following decade, a marginal increase was witnessed in the ratio of coal. To be specific, Oil and natural gas dropped from 42% and 26% in the initial year to one-third and one-quarter in 1990, respectively. Consequently, coal statistics, which constituted 22% of the entire graph in 1980, increased moderately to 27% in the next 10 years.
Turning to the latest energy sources, Although Nuclear and hydroelectric power started at a similar level at 5%, the former increased slightly while the latter remained constant. Specifically, the nuclear power proportion reached 10% in 1990, was twice as common as hydroelectric power percentage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, regarding, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07288049224 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6776436283 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715457188428 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305577690298 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324330234013 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396855399743 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424285052978 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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