The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps below illustrate an island, one is before some tourist facilities construe and the other is after tourism develop.
Overall, the island is surrounded by the sea and the trees still stand before and after the development. In addition, there is a beach which is located to the east.
Before the development of tourism the island in which has only trees. To the east there is a group of trees and the beach is next to them. Moving to the west a certain group of trees is grown near to the end of island.
After the construction of some tourist facilities, a group of accommodations is built around tree which is located to the east and another group is also set up in the west of the island. A reception and a restaurant are opened at centre of the island. Furthermore, a pier is constructed to help yachts available access to the island. Finally, more trees are grown and the beach has been turn into a swimming area.
- The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 67
- The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s a beach which is located to the east. Before the development of tourism the island i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48235294118 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59640422101 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488235294118 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9329121516 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357818727422 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123400372348 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141506689567 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231292185418 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155258640175 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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